The pillars tell you what to say. The framework tells you how to build it. Words first, slides last.
Step 1: Build your foundation. Skip slides entirely. Open a text document and write your three strongest bullet points for each of the four pillars. Twelve bullets total. Each one should be clear enough that your grandmother would understand it, compelling enough that an investor would want to dig deeper, and strong enough to stand alone. Refine ruthlessly. If someone squints when you read a bullet, rewrite it. Get a writing partner — you are too close to your own story to see it clearly.
Step 2: Craft your narrative. Transform those bullets into a story. Think like a screenwriter, not a consultant. What is the problem that keeps your customers awake at 3 AM? How did you discover it? What was the "aha" moment? How are you uniquely solving it? Where is this headed? The best pitches feel less like presentations and more like origin stories of companies that were destined to exist.
Step 3: Script your delivery. Turn the story into the exact words you will say during a 5–10 minute pitch. This is not about memorization — it is about clarity. When you know precisely how to articulate the story, confidence follows. Practice until it feels conversational, not rehearsed.
Step 4: Design supporting visuals. Now — and only now — create slides that enhance the verbal story. Follow the 30-point font rule: if you need smaller text, you are putting too much on one slide. Aim for ten words maximum per slide. Slides amplify words, they do not compete with them.
Step 5: Test and iterate. Get out of the building and pitch to real people. A lot. Never send your deck without the opportunity to present it personally. The slides will not tell the story — you will. Like a comedian perfecting a set, you will need dozens of iterations to find what lands. Your first version will be mediocre. That is not failure — that is the process.
I have argued elsewhere that the four pillars are non-negotiable; this framework is how you actually deliver them. And it is also how you avoid the fatal mistakes that kill otherwise fundable companies.
— Ry
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Key takeaways
- Start with words, not slides. Twelve bullets across four pillars.
- Bullets become narrative. Narrative becomes script. Script becomes slides.
- Get a writing partner — you are too close to your own story.
- Iterate live with real investors. Decks are not delivered, they are performed.
FAQ
Why bullets before slides?
Slides hide bad thinking behind good design. Words expose the argument. If your twelve bullets cannot stand alone, no amount of slide polish will save the pitch.
How many iterations does a pitch need?
Dozens. Like a comedian working a set, you find what lands by saying it out loud to real people in real rooms. Your first version will be mediocre — that is the process, not failure.